the content is ridiculous... but for some reason, the song kept me listening through the whole thing. musically it was good. the backing track was tops.
the content is ridiculous... but for some reason, the song kept me listening through the whole thing. musically it was good. the backing track was tops.
Thanks Kernjh! There wasn't much thought process put into it. Microphone turned on, and freestyled whatever came out. Just ended up with this as the end result, however, we squeezed extra love into the instrumental.
I guess the overall feel we were going for was, the perspective of our narrator is just some lowly nerd, either the best of his kind, or immersed in an environment of awesome, which would probably translate to surrounding pop culture, or personal preference. Thanks for you review, again! Kudos! :)
the song could use a little thickening up
i really enjoyed the intro guitar riff.........and then i lost interest in it. im a huge doom metal fan, and i could see where you wanted to go with it though.
Cheers for the feedback, I do intend to flesh it quite a bit more, I'm wanting to leave that for when I have to somewhere for it to lead first. Glad to know it translated alright at least hah.
please keep working on this!!......i love the cumbersome feel of it.
very candy kid style. good job.
i get the image of a retro car game, or cops and robber type thing. it was overly repetitious though.....and the rest of the song came in way too late.
Thanks for the feedback! Might re-work it a bit and re-upload a new version :)
Having a hard time trying to emulate the whole feeling I want to express into music.. XD
Edit: Better now? :)
i couldn't get into this. i think if you dig deep you can find things to put into this track, and a progression for it that would really bring it all together. right now there are just too many holes in it for my taste, and the progression is lacking.
Thank you for your opinion definitely still growing
good job. i like the european feel to it. i could definately see this being played in a club.
i was completely grabbed by it at 1:45. the vocals took my attention from the song. i think that more so has to do with the language barrier.........i was having to listen past them to hear the track.
it was well done though.
its different. good job
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